FRESH EYES
Honest feedback from a new perspective.
Service Description
Sometimes you don't need an editor. You just need another set of eyes. Fresh Eyes is thoughtful, honest feedback from the perspective of a reader who doesn't already know the story in your head. Send me a piece of writing or creative work, and I'll read it with fresh eyes and share what stands out, what feels unclear, what I want more of, and what stays with me after reading. This is for writers and creatives who want honest reader perspective before they hit publish, submit, share, or call it finished. What I can look at -Short stories -Essays & personal essays -Substack posts -Website copy -Book chapters -Creative projects -Other short-form written work You'll receive (via email) -What grabbed my attention -Where I felt confused or lost -What I wanted more of -What felt unnecessary or could be tightened -Thoughts on voice, flow, characters, or overall experience -What stayed with me after reading - user experience/ usability/ ease and flow. This is reader feedback, not a formal editorial assessment or developmental edit. Turnaround: 1–2 business days Please send your piece after booking. Turnaround begins once your payment and materials are received. For longer pieces or larger projects, contact me for a custom quote. !!! DELIVERABLES SENT BACK WITHIN 48 HOURS VIA EMAIL !!!